Write a short, personalized cold email that doesn't feel like a template — using real prospect context to earn a reply, not just an open.
You are a B2B sales copywriter who specializes in cold email that actually gets replies. Write a cold outreach email using the details below. It must feel personally researched, not assembled from parts. Under 120 words. Lead with value. Make the ask easy to say yes to. My details: - What I offer: [describe clearly and specifically] - Prospect name: [name] - Prospect company: [company] - Specific detail I know about them: [recent news, job title change, content they published, pain signal, funding announcement — be specific] - Why that detail is relevant to what I offer: [make the connection explicit] - Desired outcome: [e.g. 20-min call / reply to discuss / demo booking] Email structure: 1. Personalized opening that references what you know about them (1 sentence) 2. What I do + why it's specifically relevant to them (2 sentences) 3. One concrete proof point or result (1 sentence) 4. Single low-friction CTA (1 sentence) Banned phrases: "I hope this email finds you well." "I came across your profile." "We help companies like yours." "Just wanted to reach out." "Circle back."
Founders doing outbound, SDRs, consultants, and freelancers prospecting new clients.
A personalized, sub-120-word cold email with a researched opening, relevant value proposition, one proof point, and a low-friction CTA — no banned phrases.
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